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Post by piesore on Sept 15, 2005 18:30:28 GMT -5
which I posted on the comatorium...no one said anything nice, which I take it means they didn't like it. So, feel free to rip into them, I would just like feedback on how to improve the songs. I feel they're all pretty different, so it's worth skipping through each one. They're single track live takes of my guitar, and are meant for a full band, but I think they represent what I want to do enough to be criticized. www.myspace.com/bfusand I recorded cathedral and moonlight sonata together, by van halen and beethoven respectively. It's also completely live, and a first take, so there are some mistakes, but it's decent: www.megaupload.com/?d=35HWX9ZO
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Post by Bradley on Sept 15, 2005 20:04:27 GMT -5
Listen, friend, why do you not post. Don't be expecting me to look at your stuff if ye don't post. "You only call me when you're feeling depressed, when you're happy I'm so far from your mind, my patience is stretched, my loyalty vexed."
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Post by motherprussia on Sept 15, 2005 23:17:38 GMT -5
bradley, you're still an idiot i see, and piesore is one of the more intelligent and reasonable people i've come across on the internet...
..anyway, the links aren't working for me so i'll try again later, if i don't see you online before then...
(and if you have the new lightning bolt i've been hearing about, that'd be great too)
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Post by Rubberneck on Sept 15, 2005 23:45:44 GMT -5
haha! hell yeah for lightning bolt! piesore, i'll be sure to check out the songs tomorrow when i'm on campus with a decent connection. i have about a dozen songs to upload to my website as soon as i can hit my computer in a manner that will allow it to work properly, so i'd appreciate it if you stop back in the next week and do the same for me.
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Post by soniktruth on Sept 16, 2005 0:35:17 GMT -5
"ride" & "zacks back" are very cool
ride's beginning guitar is very chaotic and disturbing...sonic nightmare in a sense......zacks back's riff is fucking awesome....are you schizophrenic by the way?
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Post by piesore on Sept 16, 2005 3:09:10 GMT -5
I stopped posting here for a while because there was so little traffic here, but I check back every once and a while. Ride is supposed to just be an intro to a song which hasn't been written yet. It was influenced by lightning bolt, I think you can hear it, if you keep that in mind. The second part, with the sliding harmonics evolved from the suite pee intro by system of a down, it's the same harmonics, but only on two strings and with whammy pedal-ness. I think the schizo quality is because of the whammy pedal, it makes the notes go crazy. Zack's Back prelude to the chorus is based off Revolver by RATM, which is why I named it that. If I ever play it with a band, I'd like the tone of the guitar and bass to sound like that, not the fuzzy octave down that you do hear. I only did that because it sounds too thin with just guitar. Thanks for the feedback, again anything, positive and negative, is really appreciated. edit: If you're still having trouble listening to them on myspace, I posted the actual download links on the comatorium: www.thecomatorium.com/board/index.php?showtopic=46401
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Post by Rubberneck on Sept 16, 2005 14:45:06 GMT -5
listening now...and the first thing i have to admit i noticed is that you have melt banana listed on your influences, which makes the music great before i even hear it.
ride: very lightning bolt. now all you need is a band consisting of crazies who can keep up with the progression and this would be ace.
zack's back: this song needs some work, and don't take as an insult in the slightest. the progressions are catchy, however i would really recommend a more drastic rhythmic change somewhere in the song to break the stride. this is definitely a song that is needing some drums and a heavy bass line. a good basis for a song indeed.
i hadn't listened to the other tracks posted before, but sand tan had some nice dynamics, and violet sounds like my bloody valentine went acid tripping and transposed over the top of pink floyd in some bizarre out of body experience. cool stuff.
keep up the work, sounds good. i hope you find some other musicians to aide you on your quest, because i'd be very interested to see where this stuff goes with some more instrumentation.
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Post by piesore on Sept 16, 2005 17:01:52 GMT -5
Oh, to note zack's back, it's not actually a full song. I agree in needs more changes, I have an outro and a bridge in the works, but it was just a few ideas strung together.
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Post by piesore on Sept 16, 2005 17:07:58 GMT -5
Also, melt banana's super bad ass, but so far, they aren't much of an influence. I'm going to learn some of their shit, and hopefully incorporate their dynamic in the upcoming months. Again, thanks a bunch for the feedback.
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Post by piesore on Sept 20, 2005 12:55:32 GMT -5
I'm bumpin this to yall can bump TO this. YES.
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Post by Castro on Sept 20, 2005 15:16:39 GMT -5
i listened to the first 40secs of sand tan cuz it kept having to re-buffer but from what i heard it sounded pretty cool. i'd say you've definitely got your own signature sound there
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Post by piesore on Sept 20, 2005 21:47:11 GMT -5
Thanks man, you can d/l all the songs from the comatorium link I posted.
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Post by piesore on Sept 27, 2005 2:02:40 GMT -5
I'm going to give this one last bump before I let it die.
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Post by motherprussia on Sept 27, 2005 9:26:31 GMT -5
please find a band please, you have some very good ideas
and thanks for the lightning bolt
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Post by Castro on Sept 27, 2005 13:09:54 GMT -5
which I posted on the comatorium...no one said anything nice, which I take it means they didn't like it. the coma's full of ignorant pigs
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Post by Rubberneck on Sept 27, 2005 14:43:17 GMT -5
prussia? : ]
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Post by Evycakes on Sept 27, 2005 16:23:04 GMT -5
lightning bolt! .. prussia! omg LOL
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Post by piesore on Sept 27, 2005 19:21:07 GMT -5
which I posted on the comatorium...no one said anything nice, which I take it means they didn't like it. the coma's full of ignorant pigs I don't mind if they don't like it, I'd just rather they reply than say nothing so I can know what to improve.
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Post by Castro on Sept 28, 2005 14:09:12 GMT -5
bleh. i just hate the coma. i didnt bother to give them loads of shit before i left so i take every opputunity i can to slate them
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Post by Rubberneck on Sept 28, 2005 15:27:34 GMT -5
Marco: "Hey! You throw a pretty mean punch, captain! You must have won your fair share of fights in the day."
Murphey: "Well, actually I was just beaten up a lot in school, so now I like to sucker-punch people whenever I get the chance."
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Post by piesore on Sept 28, 2005 16:24:43 GMT -5
bleh. i just hate the coma. i didnt bother to give them loads of shit before i left so i take every opputunity i can to slate them I understand that, I've just found the people on the coma to be a lot nicer than on inertiatic.
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Post by soniktruth on Oct 3, 2005 21:57:09 GMT -5
bleh. i just hate the coma. i didnt bother to give them loads of shit before i left so i take every opputunity i can to slate them I understand that, I've just found the people on the coma to be a lot nicer than on inertiatic. its sad these people with fine taste in music find it necessary to be like everyone else in the fucking world...assholes
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Post by Castro on Oct 4, 2005 14:01:00 GMT -5
true....and its usually over something miniscule like a thread being in the wrong place
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Post by Bradley on Oct 8, 2005 20:19:50 GMT -5
I dont know coma or inertiatic
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Post by soniktruth on Oct 9, 2005 12:45:47 GMT -5
I dont know coma or inertiatic me either...
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Post by piesore on Oct 11, 2005 22:31:42 GMT -5
Thanks for keeping this thread alive kiddies, you've been a lot more supporitive here than anywhere else.
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Post by motherprussia on Oct 12, 2005 1:32:24 GMT -5
haha at the coma, the whole provacateurs forum (where you post all your creative music/writings/artwork, etc) is fuckign ridiculous, it's a bunch of 16 year olds who trip on acid all day and listen to tmv and think cedric is is godly
transplant the extract of Eiolian's distance from the stalk umbilical eggshells i'm stepping on the exo-plastic remains of the neck pinched ear whatever the fuck
if this is poetry, it's dada
yeah, i know i'm maybe still in the top ten in posts there, but shit, man, shit, butts
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Post by piesore on Oct 12, 2005 1:51:26 GMT -5
A lot of it is pretty bad, but I've dug some of the arists on there...there was this spoken word kid from a long time ago who actually was good at mimicking cedric, but he was bad at taking criticism and dissapeared. I don't remember his name either, it's a shame.
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Post by Castro on Oct 12, 2005 14:17:04 GMT -5
transplant the extract of Eiolian's distance from the stalk umbilical eggshells i'm stepping on the exo-plastic remains of the neck pinched ear whatever the fuck what
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Post by piesore on Oct 13, 2005 16:42:41 GMT -5
The poetry section is chock full of nougety goodness like that.
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